Review for (X)

 First Look

I love that it’s a Disney rp! The url is a bit long but I honestly think the length of the url  doesn’t matter. But I know it turns off some people. You could easily tell it’s Disney from the icon and url.  But the icon is okay. It doesn’t indicate that it’s an rp. When I see it, I think it’s a Disney blog rather than an rp. You could include a gradient and add your url to the icon to make it more appealing.  

Navigation

The navigation page is pretty good. But I would change the color of the text because it’s too bright and blinding to read. Other than that, the navigation is easy to go through. Everything is easy to access and the navigation page is easy to find. 

Plot

The plot doesn’t really give me an idea about what the rp is about. After reading it, I still have some questions about it. And if it wasn’t for the url, I probably wouldn’t have fully gotten the plot. So I feel that you should develop it a bit more. Although, I do think the plot is quite different than the usual Disney rps so props to you!

Characters

I see that you use a mix of underused and popular fcs but mostly underused. I don’t really mind if an rp used underused or popular, but I do like when admins give less popular fc’s a chance. The diversity is pretty good too and the characters have differing personalities. The bios are nice and I like how each starts with Once Upon a Time. It gives the bio a storybook feel.

Admins

I do appreciate the use of underused mascots and think it’s really cool that you guys decided to use these mascots. You seem very friendly and dedicated to the rp. And I see that you guys are active, which is very important when it comes to being an admin, so good job!

Graphics/Theme

I’m not a big fan of the graphics and the theme is quite overused. I think the sidebar is too plain and that you could possibly use a different gradient, add a png, and add your url to make it look more interesting.  I don’t like the color scheme and think that you should probably go for a lighter color since the blue gives me a sad vibe about the rp. When I first saw the background, I thought it was white. I think the background is too bright and doesn’t go well with the theme. Although everything is easy to read, the colors of the page don’t go well together. 

And that’s it! I apologize for being so late but good luck on your roleplay!